Timmy was fast asleep. He awakened in the middle of the night, when he felt a slight cool breeze. He got out of his broken bed to close the window. While he was at the window, he saw a flickering light in the distance. It looked like someone holding a flashlight, but who would be up this late? He decided to forget about the weird light, and so he went to sleep.
The next day, he decided to go look by the riverbed, where the light seemed to come from. There, he saw tracks. Car tracks. But why? Not any car would travel in soft soil like this. These questions ran through his head as he and his mom got ready to leave, although they were traveling to who knows where?
Anfernee came running out of his house. He had to run away. Far away. So that nobody could find him. Because what he saw was so horrible, so graphic, so surreal, that he had to leave now.
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i like it because of your vocabulary
i like it because of your vocabulary
I liked your entry because it was suspenceful and you want to know what to know what is going to happen.
very good job, because it has great amounts of detail. Great mystery!
i really liked this because you gave a lot of detail. I felt like i was really there.
i like your story because it s very suspenseful
tommy I like your story it is interesting beacuse of the vocabulary
I think this post is very good because of the description you put in this like "when he felt a slight cool breeze."
Tommy,
This was a really good journal entry, and it had pretty good vocabulary. I liked it because it was so interesting at the end that i wanted to read on. Thats what good writers try to do when they write a book.
Thanks now I don't have to think of my own story for my homework But ill still get detention cuz she is a mad thing Im not sure if she A hooman but ty anyway
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