Wednesday, November 28, 2007
2100 continued..
Anfernee was walking down the street. He was talking to his best friend, Jack, about how fun they had that day. They enjoyed talking about how they made fun of the government, how they did a project on saving the bees, and their lives in general. Everyday this happened, they would wake up, go to school and come home. Nothing ever changed. But today was different. Anfernee had stomach pains. But how could this happen? Nobody ever got sick. Not in the confederacy, anyway.
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2 comments:
I think this is a good little addition to yoru story because its a good topic to think about.
i think it needs to be a little bit longer but it was a good thing to right about and it was very intresting.
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