Thursday, March 20, 2008

2100 continued...

Timmy was still hiding behind the dumpster with his mom. They were quickly enjoying some nachos, while doing so in silence. Timmy was thinking about the previous day. Where had that boy gone? Timmy's mother said that she was going to go do some shopping. Timmy wanted to join her, but she said that it was to risky. He was also in a wierd mental state- thinking that the missing boy was his fault. He shouldn't have run to get his mom. He should have helped the boy. But what is past is past, Timmy told himself. When his mother had gone for a little while, he decided to go to bed.
Timmy woke up later that evening, when his mother shook him up. She was yelling that they had to leave instantly. Even without their belongings. Timmy suddenly smelled smoke. When they had gotten out from behind their dumpster, Timmy saw a huge, soaring blaze of fire. The inferno was deadly hot, and the little boy soon saw people running in fear. The boy wondered how this could happen, because almost everything is made of metal or concrete, which can't burn! Timmy asked his mother this question, who said that without a doubt, that this was no accident....

4 comments:

John said...

Tommy.

How much longer will this stroy continue?
It's time for this story to end. And wright about something else.
I'm not downing this but every story has a ending.

----J.G

linden said...

Hey tommy!
I really liked this. I havent read the other ones yet, but i can tell you've put alot of effort into it =) i liked this because it was really discriptive, and actually sounded like it would make a good book. Anyways, your really good at writing keep it up.

Lacy said...

good job. I really liked this because of how descriptive it is. Plus, i liked the dialog in it. The dialog made it feel very real. keep up the good work.

daniel said...

how much longer will this story continue? i want to know because i love reading them. i like this story because its full of detail.. good story