Wednesday, November 28, 2007

2100 continued...

On the edge of the city, there was this boy called Timmy. He lived near the river, in a little shack covered in rotting moss. He lived with his mom, and he often would go fish by the river. Not today. Today, they were packing up. Timmy did not know although he heard his mom say" they're coming to take the house." He didn't know why they would, but if he wasn't only eight years old, he would understand that the new government had more taxes, and that paying them was extremely hard. So, they packed everything they had, which wasn't much, but was very valuable to the small family. They took their old bikes, and followed the river until they came to a motel. The mother paid for a room, and they entered a small apartment, where they went to sleep...

Meanwhile, Anfernee was telling Jack about having cramps. How could this be? They talked about it, and when Anfernee arrived at his house, he was going to tell his family what had happened. When he got inside, he found his family, which included his mom, dad and little sister. What he saw though, made him realize that his cramps weren't normal..

3 comments:

Taylor said...

are you righting a book because it sounds like it

John said...

Timmy sounds like the closest thing to Tommy you could find.

Cortney =] said...

I like this entry because of all the detail.